hi friends,your video was very funny and educational.your pronounciation were generally correct.But you should have said /dʒəːm/. Rukiye should have said 'ıt is very dirty' instead of 'they are..' thanks....
Your organization is very nice.But,there are some mistakes,for example;"look me" is wrong,it should have been "look at me" and "cleanliness"was pronounced wrongly.
Hi friends; your video is very interesting and it is a smart idea to design and organize in such way. Creative, informative and joyful so everything is ok for you.
Hi my friends, I realy enjoyed while watching your video.It's very enjoyable and I'm sure that you must be enjoy while you were shooting this video.And also it's educational for children .thanks..
hi! Your video is educative and funny for children. I have to mention it as we are teaching to children by this program. There is one mistake "pay attention" is used with "to"= pay attention to. Thx for your effort good job.
your organization is very good, but there are some grammatical mistakes. you should pay attention to the prepositions like "pay attention to" "look at me". Anyway l like your video. ls is educational and enjoyable, you can teach something to children. Also l want to add that Margaret's voice is so niceee! :))))
i may be mistaken but in the lyrics you say " i keeping clean" or something like that which could have been "i am keeping clean" as you keep yourself clean. good job guys well organized video.
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ReplyDeletehi friends,your video was very funny and educational.your pronounciation were generally correct.But you should have said /dʒəːm/. Rukiye should have said 'ıt is very dirty' instead of 'they are..' thanks....
ReplyDeleteI am sorry my friends.I searched and got the idea that /ɜ:/ and /ə:/ are the same sounds.So your pronounciation of germ was correct. :)
ReplyDeleteit is a funny video, i had fun while i was watching your video but there are some grammar mistakes like ' looks, you hand','they are dirty'
ReplyDeleteYour organization is very nice.But,there are some mistakes,for example;"look me" is wrong,it should have been "look at me" and "cleanliness"was pronounced wrongly.
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Thanks for your effort friends...I liked your singing and of course all your video;however, you should have said 'look at me'..Congratulations..
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ReplyDeleteHi my friends, I realy enjoyed while watching your video.It's very enjoyable and I'm sure that you must be enjoy while you were shooting this video.And also it's educational for children .thanks..
ReplyDeleteSinging a song in your video is a good idea. I liked your video but there were some grammer mistakes.
ReplyDeleteexcept some grammatical mistakes, your videos are great ,also informative ,thanks ,confratulations..
ReplyDeletehi! Your video is educative and funny for children. I have to mention it as we are teaching to children by this program. There is one mistake "pay attention" is used with "to"= pay attention to. Thx for your effort good job.
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ReplyDeletei liked it but one thing i noticed; i wish you had vocalized the introduction video, it would be so much better :)
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ReplyDeletehi friends you performance is good and understandable for children.I could not catch any grammatical mistakes thank you
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ReplyDeleteyour organization is very good, but there are some grammatical mistakes. you should pay attention to the prepositions like "pay attention to" "look at me". Anyway l like your video. ls is educational and enjoyable, you can teach something to children. Also l want to add that Margaret's voice is so niceee! :))))
ReplyDeletei may be mistaken but in the lyrics you say " i keeping clean" or something like that which could have been "i am keeping clean" as you keep yourself clean. good job guys well organized video.
ReplyDeleteHi friends; your video is very interesting but there are some grammatical mistakes. thanks
ReplyDeletehi guys, your video is educational and funny. Your pronunciation is also good. Thank you :)
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