hi guys, anil ant is pronounced as 'ænt', and whole as 'hohl'. other than small mistakes i liked how you got in to the act while talking about ants plus the thought about you being an African made my day :) By the way ahsen please dont sing :D i really enjoyed the video
Hi friends ! you have some technical problems about sound the light .. it is so dark .. there were some pronounciation mistakes .. for example album .. it needs to be pronounced '' 'ælbem ''.. thanks !
hi friends,first and foremost your organization was good and your topic was very funny.But you have some pronounciation mistakes which I could catch.Anıl should have said /ɪgˈzak(t)li/ instead of /egzaytli/,/ɪgˈnɔː/ instead of /ignored/,/ˈpriːvɪəs/ instead of /prevəs/ and 'my book' instead of 'my books'. Berat should have said /ˈiːkw(ə)li/ instead of /ekuli/ , /kəˈrɪə/ instead of /kaˈrɪər/ and /prɪnˈsɛs/ instead of /prenˈsıs/.ahsen shoul have said 'while ı was alone...' instead of 'when...' and /ˈalbəm/ instead of /ˈalbüm/.In addition all of you had some hesitation. thanks :)
There are some pronunciation mistakes such as "exactly,equally" and there are grammatical mistakes such as"let me say you".It should have been "let me say to you".Finally,you should have spoken fluently.
your speech is very slow ,you can be more lively and the beginnig of the video was not a daily show like a report , not "three wife " , "three wives"should be said...
hi firends! your organization is good but there are some pronunciation mistakes. 'right' should be pronounced as /rʌɪt/, 'exactly' should be pronounced as /ɪgˈzak(t)li, ɛg-/. congrats.
friends I think your energy is low it is a daily show and it should have been more energetic. another problem is your fluency you should be more careful.
Hi friends ! In fact I did not like your show program I really couldn't hear your voices and couldn't see your faces. You have some mistakes like ' not at all'and some gramatical mistakes as well. You should be funny, energetic.
The sound and the light of the video is so low that's why, I was not able to hear your voices quite well,but as far as I could hear, you pronounced 'career,album,exactly' wrongly,,be careful..Besides, you should have been more energetic and lively.Thanks for your effort,though..
hi friends,first of all the sound of the video is so low so it's difficult to understand what you were saying.in addition to this you made some grammatical mistakes such as 'childrens' and pronunciational mistakes for example whole and career.finally you should have been more energetic...
hi friends . thank you for your your effort but please be careful about using "the" before "same" and put "a,an" before "adjective phrases" and "Fransız" in Turkish is "French" in English.and I wish you had controlled yourself more.
sorry but l couldn't hear very well, so l can't make a comment so much about your presentation but generally you should be careful about your pronunciation.
there was a technical problem, in anıl's and berat's part the volume is so low.
ReplyDeletei can't hear sounds of the video.so i can't make a comment.thanks.
ReplyDeletehi friends :) your organization is good. but you should care about the fluency in your sentences and the pronunciation of "exactly".. thanks :)
ReplyDeletehi guys, anil ant is pronounced as 'ænt', and whole as 'hohl'. other than small mistakes i liked how you got in to the act while talking about ants plus the thought about you being an African made my day :) By the way ahsen please dont sing :D i really enjoyed the video
ReplyDeletehi firends your topic and organization is fine.but there isn't fluency in speech and there is a sound problem.
ReplyDeleteThx for preparing the video. Pronunciation, and fluency can be improved. Intonation is also needed to be studied on well.
ReplyDeleteHi friends ! you have some technical problems about sound the light .. it is so dark ..
ReplyDeletethere were some pronounciation mistakes .. for example album ..
it needs to be pronounced '' 'ælbem ''..
thanks !
hi friends,first and foremost your organization was good and your topic was very funny.But you have some pronounciation mistakes which I could catch.Anıl should have said /ɪgˈzak(t)li/ instead of /egzaytli/,/ɪgˈnɔː/ instead of /ignored/,/ˈpriːvɪəs/ instead of /prevəs/ and 'my book' instead of 'my books'. Berat should have said /ˈiːkw(ə)li/ instead of /ekuli/ , /kəˈrɪə/ instead of /kaˈrɪər/ and /prɪnˈsɛs/ instead of /prenˈsıs/.ahsen shoul have said 'while ı was alone...' instead of 'when...' and /ˈalbəm/ instead of /ˈalbüm/.In addition all of you had some hesitation. thanks :)
ReplyDeleteThere are some pronunciation mistakes such as "exactly,equally" and there are grammatical mistakes such as"let me say you".It should have been "let me say to you".Finally,you should have spoken fluently.
ReplyDeleteYour video is generally good but you pronounced some words wrongly.These words are welcome, explain.
ReplyDeleteyour speech is very slow ,you can be more lively and the beginnig of the video was not a daily show like a report , not "three wife " , "three wives"should be said...
ReplyDeleteI think you should speak more fluently.
ReplyDeleteThere are some grammatical errors in your speech,for example; writer said 'childrens' instead of saying 'children'.
ReplyDeletehi firends! your organization is good but there are some pronunciation mistakes. 'right' should be pronounced as /rʌɪt/, 'exactly' should be pronounced as /ɪgˈzak(t)li, ɛg-/. congrats.
ReplyDeletehi friends. first of all your organization is good but there is a problem with your sound system and there is not fluency in your speech thanks )
ReplyDeletehi, i can not watch all of the video because an error occured :) as i watch, there is no mistake but should be more fluently and funny, thanks :)
ReplyDeleteı think you should have spoken fluently.there are also some pronunciation mistakes such as 'ant,album,exactly'.but, I liked it.
ReplyDeletefriends I think your energy is low it is a daily show and it should have been more energetic. another problem is your fluency you should be more careful.
ReplyDeletehello guys,you should improve your intonation and be more energetic
ReplyDeleteHi friends ! In fact I did not like your show program I really couldn't hear your voices and couldn't see your faces. You have some mistakes like ' not at all'and some gramatical mistakes as well. You should be funny, energetic.
ReplyDeleteThe sound and the light of the video is so low that's why, I was not able to hear your voices quite well,but as far as I could hear, you pronounced 'career,album,exactly' wrongly,,be careful..Besides, you should have been more energetic and lively.Thanks for your effort,though..
ReplyDeletehi friends,first of all the sound of the video is so low so it's difficult to understand what you were saying.in addition to this you made some grammatical mistakes such as 'childrens' and pronunciational mistakes for example whole and career.finally you should have been more energetic...
ReplyDeletehi friends . thank you for your your effort but please be careful about using "the" before "same" and put "a,an" before "adjective phrases" and "Fransız" in Turkish is "French" in English.and I wish you had controlled yourself more.
ReplyDeleteHi friends,first of all I could not see your faces and some mistakes such as "really,exactly..".Also I could not hear your voices well.Thank you
ReplyDeleteintro must be the hook! if the speaker had drawn audience's attention it would be like a daily show.
ReplyDeleteIt seems good and enoug pronunciation.May be that can be some care abour pronunciation :)
ReplyDeletethe sound problem is very big ı think but another things such as body language , pronouncation are very good. your video is funny thank you friends.
ReplyDeleteI liked your video. However,there is a technical problem. thanks.
ReplyDeletethere is sound problem.there are some pronounciation mistakes such as exactly , album.you shouldn't speak more slowly.
ReplyDeletesorry but l couldn't hear very well, so l can't make a comment so much about your presentation but generally you should be careful about your pronunciation.
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