congratulations friends..i liked your video..it is well organised,however, you should not have used pauses like 'ııııhh'.. so much..You did well,though.Thanks for your effort.
it is a good video ı couldn't find any pronunciation mistake but you corrected your mistake "collections" instead of "collections",and also your pronunciation would be more fluent.
a good fashion video but I wish you were more careful about your fluency and be a more fluent. I can't say to catch pronunciation mistake you also used your body language. thank you.
your video is very good.there is no grammer mistake.intonations are very good.thank you.
ReplyDeleteyou said the word "comfortable" in a wrong way.
ReplyDeletecongratulations friends..i liked your video..it is well organised,however, you should not have used pauses like 'ııııhh'.. so much..You did well,though.Thanks for your effort.
ReplyDeleteYou should be more careful about your intonation and speak more fluently.
ReplyDeleteI liked your video,it is a good organisation.I didn't catch any mistake.
ReplyDeletehi friends. your video is good morever there is not any grammatical mistake.thanks
ReplyDeleteorganisation is very great :)intonations are very good.These are the criteria for me. thank you!
ReplyDeleteit is a good video ı couldn't find any pronunciation mistake but you corrected your mistake "collections" instead of "collections",and also your pronunciation would be more fluent.
ReplyDeleteHi. Good organization. Good intonation. Good pronunciation. All good! Congratulations!
ReplyDeletehi friends! your video is well-organized ı liked your intonations and ı couldnt catch any pronunciational mistake congrats
ReplyDeletehi friends :) there isn't any mistake.Also,your video is good.
ReplyDeletea good fashion video but I wish you were more careful about your fluency and be a more fluent. I can't say to catch pronunciation mistake you also used your body language. thank you.
ReplyDeletehi friends I liked your video.I could not catch any mistakes.Thank you
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