hi friends, in my view, you should have performanced actively in this video.you should say'what are the plans about future?' instead of 'what are the plan'.you should pronunce /səkˈsɛs/.thanks...
your video is good but there is a pronunciation mistake "success"/səkˈsɛs/, and there is also grammatical mistakes "what are the plan?". you should add "s" to the word of "plan".
hello friends, it is a nice music video but I wish you had chosen a better place and there is a mistake in the pronunciation of "America" it is read as it is written. thank you
it's a good video "success" is pronunced diffrent in your speech one is wrong ,it should be " sJk'ses"with schwa sound.
ReplyDeleteyour video is good but there is some pronunciation mıstakes like professional and success
ReplyDeleteHi friends, there are some pronunciation mistakes like ''America'', ''success''. Thamks for your video..
ReplyDeletehi friends, in my view, you should have performanced actively in this video.you should say'what are the plans about future?' instead of 'what are the plan'.you should pronunce /səkˈsɛs/.thanks...
ReplyDeletehi fiends your video is good but you have some pronunciation mistakes be more careful.
ReplyDeleteThere is a pronunciation mistake: 'success'
ReplyDeleteThere are some pronunciation mistake like success and professional.
ReplyDeleteyou should be careful about the stress on words and fluency of your speech. other than that thanks for the video
ReplyDeletehi friends i liked your video but there are some pronunciation mistakes.You should be careful.Thanks
ReplyDeleteI liked your video but there are some pronunciation mistakes as in "America". Thanks.
ReplyDeleteyour video is good but there is a pronunciation mistake "success"/səkˈsɛs/, and there is also grammatical mistakes "what are the plan?". you should add "s" to the word of "plan".
ReplyDeleteApart from the word 'success' pronounced wrongly,I could not catch any mistakes..Thanks for your effort..
ReplyDeleteSorry, very poor voice quality your video does have. I cannot remark on it since I couldn't hear.
ReplyDeleteHi friends, i liked what you did but you should be careful about pronunciation. I caught some mistakes like success and America,thank you
ReplyDeletehello friends, it is a nice music video but I wish you had chosen a better place and there is a mistake in the pronunciation of "America" it is read as it is written. thank you
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