Your video is nice. It is an interesting recipe. Unfortunately, you did grammatical mistakes while using present tense and present continues tense, but the fluency is ok :)
at the begınnıng of your vıdeo you tell about what the programm is and who you are.ıt's a good start.before starting to make your cook giving some ınformation about ıt is also good.you hesitated a lıttle bıt.however ıt ıs really fluent.thanks for it
It is one of the best videos.You all spoke fluently.In addition to this, the steps are very clear to understand.There is a pronunciation mistake such as ready.Thanks.
hi friends :) the steps are clear,organization is well-prepared.ı couldn't catch any grammatical mistake.but you should be careful the pronunciation of "ingredient".thanks :)
Hi dear friends, there is no voice problem in your video, so I could hear you easily! and your video is so smooth! Especially Ebru is like a food programme presenter ;) good work! CONGRATULATIONS! :)
hi friends altough there are some pauses at the beginning in general you all speak fluently,especially the presenter speaks effectively. Your intonation and pronunciation are clear and comprhensible. Steps are well-organized and clear
Hi friends,firstly I want to say that your intoduction part is good and you introduced the program and ingredients before starting to cook.there are some pauses but you try to speak fluently.
hi fiends,your video is well.When your speech input was successful but you should have been more effective when closing your video.The Cook who ı don't know her name should have said /pan/ instead of /pin/.she shouldn't have said 'we are take ...' thanks :)
the steps are clear,organization of the show was well-prepared. "We will cook to you" could have said as today we will be cooking you, or we will be cooking french toast for you. I like Iris`s pronunciation. Teflon pan was pronounced wrong.
steps were clear to understand. you could have used more transition words. it is good that you started with giving some tips and information about what you are cooking. Becareful with the choice of words.
All the steps were explained one by one,clearly as should be and with no pronounciation mistake to make the recipe accurate. (: nice to see kitchen smocks in terms of the importance given to ur job,also looks delicious cong.
an interesting recipe and a well organized video, all of you spoke fluently and your intonation was good, except for some grammatical mistakes, you are perfect...
generally it is a good video I liked your programme`s beginning. but in the following time you have pronunciation mistakes such as in "banana" "vanilla",do not use "cook to you" instead " for you". thank you for your effort.
You made a good beginning..I noticed hesitation while you were speaking,though.Also, be careful while you are saying these words: vanilin,cinnamon,pour,and we say 'cook for sbd' not 'to sbd'.Thanks for your effort..
hello girls, it is a good job, beginning of video, the steps are so good. i could not any mistakes but 'ıııı' is not so good and the final of video is not as good as the beginning. congrulations :))
hi friends.at the begining of the video you tell us abaout what we will see in the video. it makes the movie understandable.there wasnt any mistake and also your organization was very attractive:)
Hi girls ! I like this sweet toast I want to taste it :) even if you have some pronounciation mistakes it is good .. But I think maybe you could show your faces as much as what you were doing :) ! you just focused on the toast .. thanks ..
Hi ladies! I liked your video so much.The toast looked so delicious, good choice! Your pronounciation and intonation were so right! The only problem was your cameraman I would like to see your faces as well. Well done !
hi friends,I liked the video.You are speaking fluently.It is a good job except for some grammatical mistakes such as now we will..it has to be present continuous tense..thank you
Your video is nice. It is an interesting recipe. Unfortunately, you did grammatical mistakes while using present tense and present continues tense, but the fluency is ok :)
ReplyDeleteat the begınnıng of your vıdeo you tell about what the programm is and who you are.ıt's a good start.before starting to make your cook giving some ınformation about ıt is also good.you hesitated a lıttle bıt.however ıt ıs really fluent.thanks for it
ReplyDeleteIt is one of the best videos.You all spoke fluently.In addition to this, the steps are very clear to understand.There is a pronunciation mistake such as ready.Thanks.
ReplyDeleteyour toast looks different i havent taste it before :) your speech is clear thanks
ReplyDeletehi friends, ı like your video your steps are clear ı couldnt catch any mistake.thanks.
ReplyDeletehi friends :) the steps are clear,organization is well-prepared.ı couldn't catch any grammatical mistake.but you should be careful the pronunciation of "ingredient".thanks :)
ReplyDeletehi guys it was a really good work it was easy to understand thanks!!
ReplyDeleteHi dear friends, there is no voice problem in your video, so I could hear you easily! and your video is so smooth! Especially Ebru is like a food programme presenter ;) good work!
ReplyDeleteCONGRATULATIONS! :)
I like your video.It is a really good.However,there is a pronounciation mistake such as cinnamon and vanilin should be vanilla.
ReplyDeletehi friends altough there are some pauses at the beginning in general you all speak fluently,especially the presenter speaks effectively. Your intonation and pronunciation are clear and comprhensible. Steps are well-organized and clear
ReplyDeleteHi friends,firstly I want to say that your intoduction part is good and you introduced the program and ingredients before starting to cook.there are some pauses but you try to speak fluently.
ReplyDeleteHi friends, steps are really clear. Hoever,there are some grammatical mistakes such as package, banana..Good job. Thanks for your video :)
ReplyDeletehi fiends,your video is well.When your speech input was successful but you should have been more effective when closing your video.The Cook who ı don't know her name should have said /pan/ instead of /pin/.she shouldn't have said 'we are take ...' thanks :)
ReplyDeletehi friends,your video is good and steps are clear.but there are some grammatical mistakes.thanks )
ReplyDeletehi, your video was very nice,the steps were clear enough. but you made some mistakes,be careful please!
ReplyDeletethe steps are clear,organization of the show was well-prepared. "We will cook to you" could have said as today we will be cooking you, or we will be cooking french toast for you. I like Iris`s pronunciation. Teflon pan was pronounced wrong.
ReplyDeletesteps were clear to understand. you could have used more transition words. it is good that you started with giving some tips and information about what you are cooking. Becareful with the choice of words.
ReplyDeleteyou are reallly good ,good beginning ,all the things went on good and fluent , congratlations
ReplyDeleteAll the steps were explained one by one,clearly as should be and with no pronounciation mistake to make the recipe accurate. (: nice to see kitchen smocks in terms of the importance given to ur job,also looks delicious cong.
ReplyDeleteyour organization is good you explained your steps very well and fluently congrats.
ReplyDeleteI really liked your video you explained the steps very well but we couldn't see your faces.
ReplyDeleteI thing,everything is okay. Its clear and well-prepared.good job!
ReplyDeletehi friends,your video is good and understandable.but you should have ended more effective.
ReplyDeleteHi. We don' t say "cook to you" we say "cook for you". Maybe you could pay a little bit more attention to intonation, and your pronunciation is nice.
ReplyDeletean interesting recipe and a well organized video, all of you spoke fluently and your intonation was good, except for some grammatical mistakes, you are perfect...
ReplyDeletegenerally it is a good video I liked your programme`s beginning. but in the following time you have pronunciation mistakes such as in "banana" "vanilla",do not use "cook to you" instead " for you". thank you for your effort.
ReplyDeleteThe video is enjoyable.you all are successful and you could speak fluently.but you made a mistake like"we are take..."(duygu bastırma)
ReplyDeleteThere is no problem with the voice it is clear.I really liked this recipe.It seems quiet easy and I think I'll try it one day.
ReplyDeleteYou made a good beginning..I noticed hesitation while you were speaking,though.Also, be careful while you are saying these words: vanilin,cinnamon,pour,and we say 'cook for sbd' not 'to sbd'.Thanks for your effort..
ReplyDeletehi girls..your video is welldone and enjoyable except a few grammatical mistakes and your excitement,you did a good job.congratulations.
ReplyDeletehello girls, it is a good job, beginning of video, the steps are so good. i could not any mistakes but 'ıııı' is not so good and the final of video is not as good as the beginning. congrulations :))
ReplyDeleteı liked your video and i think it is very enjoyable there are some mistakes about grammer and pronouncation but other points are very good thank you
ReplyDeletehi friends.at the begining of the video you tell us abaout what we will see in the video. it makes the movie understandable.there wasnt any mistake and also your organization was very attractive:)
ReplyDeleteHi girls ! I like this sweet toast I want to taste it :)
ReplyDeleteeven if you have some pronounciation mistakes it is good .. But I think maybe you could show your faces as much as what you were doing :) ! you just focused on the toast ..
thanks ..
Hi ladies! I liked your video so much.The toast looked so delicious, good choice! Your pronounciation and intonation were so right! The only problem was your cameraman I would like to see your faces as well. Well done !
ReplyDeletehi friends,I liked the video.You are speaking fluently.It is a good job except for some grammatical mistakes such as now we will..it has to be present continuous tense..thank you
ReplyDeleteyour toast looks delicious, it makes me hungry :)generally you are good and your speech was clear enough to understand the steps.
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