It is really a good video, they support their news ,speak clearly but at the end of the video,"..how they give families cause to hope.." was used but I think instead of 'cause', 'reason' will be more suitable.
Your video is really good.Your pronounciation is fine.The video is about the topic concerning everybody.Therefore,your video impressed on me.However,anchor should have spoken less in the beginning of the video.
hi my friends,you organized your video very well.In addition all of you spoke clearly.I couldn't catch pronounciation mistakes in your speech except for one word which was said by Ayşen.She should said /fɪˈnɒmɪnən/ instead of /feˈnɒmɪn/.Ayşen's speech input and output are well-organized.Tuğba had a grammatical mistake.She should have said ''after few days ago,my father died'' instead of ''has died''. thanks :)
hi my friends :) your organization is good but as an anchor ayşen should have spoken less than the others..you should care about the pronunciation of "listened". maybe "audience" can be changed with "viewer" or "spectator".there is no problem about fluency. thanks :)
it's a good video, both creative and usual issue you have talked.I enjoyed,while I was watching.Your intonation is good but it would be better,if Hafize should have talked more fluently.But I see,you made an effort to perform this video.thanks...
Hello my friends ! I like your video because you used places and the subject so good .. But we should say '' How did you feel after donation ? '' not '' How did you feel after donating ? '' in there we should use donation as a noun . Beside this , your video is great . I like it.. Thanks for your performances
The television announcer should be a little more fluent, and pronounce words well. As to the patient, she is fluent but i cannot hear all she says( because of camera of course). When it comes to the correspondent, she can also try for a better pronunciation and be more fluent. Thx for preparing it.
your subject is good but I wish you had used gesture, and facial expression .. and there is a mistake in the use of the verb" think", there is no "to" after the verb "listen". neverthless thank you.
your topic is good but the anchor is looking to the computer too much and it effects the reality negatively.the correspondent should have spoken more fluently.but,good job.
Hello my friend!Your video is generally good but there was a grammatical mistake.It should have been ''a few days ago my father died'' instead of has died.Thanks.
hi guys.thanks for your video.ıt's well-organized.but the beginning of it could be shorter.aysen should speak less.I couldnt catch any grammatical or pronunciatıonal mistake
hi frieds, first of all congratulations! Your setting is really good, but I thing you can choose a different and more interesting topic. Another problem is your fluency, you could speak more fluent.
As its a news program Aysen should have introduced herself first and make a strong start, instead she gave too much information about organ donation. It seemed like a advertisement to inform people then a news program. It is a nice effort that you went to the hospital to record the video. See you next program should be, see you at the next program. I really liked the smooth transitions between the parts.
tuba says we couldnt a donator for heart. We couldnt find a donator for his heart' is the right sentence. 'who experienced this condition' should be who experienced these situations. it is good that you took this video work seriously that you went to the hospital for that.
us ,students always doing that pronuonciation mistake. the /ı/ sound in "sick" shouldnt be pronounced the "i" sound as in turkish. it' d be better if we pronounce like a sound between "i" and "ı"
hi friends, first of all your organization is good but there are some pronunciation mistakes such as "listen " and "sick" also there are some grammatical mistake and wrong word choice such as "auidence". In general it is a good video but you should be more careful about intonation and using gestures while speaking
Hi friends, the video is good.I liked the subject.The speaker is speaking fluently and the sound is good.But some time there is no intonation and stress...thank you
hi friends ı think your organization is good in addition ı could not catch any grammatical mistake except for ''a few days ago my father has died'' . but ı really liked your job. thanks.
it is a good video and well-organized. ıt is creative =) but as far as ı can hear, there are some mistake. you should be careful while you are saying 'sick,listen' =)
You have an effective beginning before starting giving the news.At first,the camera should have been set in a higher place since the laptop on the table seemed bigger than the tv announcer.The correspondent should have been much more vivid and a bit lively.Also,'crucial' was not pronounced right..thanks for your effort,though..
hii, your topic "organ donation" is perfect. your job is the same as a real event i liked it very much but i think "has died" is a wrong using and your rising intonation is not perfect. thanks for your efforts :))
Hi friends ! Your topic was perfect. But the program had not a good start. There was no intonation. There were some mistakes like ' the situation cause' and some more like this. But your plan and organization were very creative! Thank you !
Hello friens. Your place choice is really good :) I enjoyed your video. There are some pronunciation mistakes such as '' listen ''. Thanks your video :)
there are some grammatical mistakes especially in anchor's speech.The anchor said " the second reason is morally" but "morally" is adverb and it is not used here, but you can use "morality". Secondly, the tonation should be better, and the speech should be more fluent.
It is really a good video, they support their news ,speak clearly but at the end of the video,"..how they give families cause to hope.." was used but I think instead of 'cause', 'reason' will be more suitable.
ReplyDeleteIn fact,your video is good and you are successful.But the sentence "a few days ago my father has died" should be "a few days ago my father died".
ReplyDeleteYour video is really good.Your pronounciation is fine.The video is about the topic concerning everybody.Therefore,your video impressed on me.However,anchor should have spoken less in the beginning of the video.
ReplyDeleteIt is a good video but I think they should speak more fluently.
ReplyDeleteThere is problem about fluency but your organization is really nice. Transitions are good, there is no disunity.
ReplyDeleteGood job there! But the reasons for the news can be more effective.
ReplyDeletethe settting is perfect ,the intonations can be recognized easily ,conratulations
Deletehi my friends,you organized your video very well.In addition all of you spoke clearly.I couldn't catch pronounciation mistakes in your speech except for one word which was said by Ayşen.She should said /fɪˈnɒmɪnən/ instead of /feˈnɒmɪn/.Ayşen's speech input and output are well-organized.Tuğba had a grammatical mistake.She should have said ''after few days ago,my father died'' instead of ''has died''. thanks :)
ReplyDeletehi my friends :) your organization is good but as an anchor ayşen should have spoken less than the others..you should care about the pronunciation of "listened". maybe "audience" can be changed with "viewer" or "spectator".there is no problem about fluency. thanks :)
ReplyDeleteit's a good video, both creative and usual issue you have talked.I enjoyed,while I was watching.Your intonation is good but it would be better,if Hafize should have talked more fluently.But I see,you made an effort to perform this video.thanks...
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ReplyDeleteHello my friends ! I like your video because you used places and the subject so good .. But we should say '' How did you feel after donation ? '' not '' How did you feel after donating ? '' in there we should use donation as a noun . Beside this , your video is great . I like it.. Thanks for your performances
ReplyDeleteThe television announcer should be a little more fluent, and pronounce words well. As to the patient, she is fluent but i cannot hear all she says( because of camera of course). When it comes to the correspondent, she can also try for a better pronunciation and be more fluent. Thx for preparing it.
ReplyDeleteyour subject is good but I wish you had used gesture, and facial expression .. and there is a mistake in the use of the verb" think", there is no "to" after the verb "listen". neverthless thank you.
ReplyDeleteyour topic is good but the anchor is looking to the computer too much and it effects the reality negatively.the correspondent should have spoken more fluently.but,good job.
ReplyDeleteHello my friend!Your video is generally good but there was a grammatical mistake.It should have been ''a few days ago my father died'' instead of has died.Thanks.
ReplyDeletehi guys.thanks for your video.ıt's well-organized.but the beginning of it could be shorter.aysen should speak less.I couldnt catch any grammatical or pronunciatıonal mistake
ReplyDeletehi frieds, first of all congratulations! Your setting is really good, but I thing you can choose a different and more interesting topic. Another problem is your fluency, you could speak more fluent.
ReplyDeleteHeyy guys i like ur work it was really authentic and ur message was meaningful for people who wait organ donation thanks!
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ReplyDeleteit is realy good work conguratulitons for your effort but ıf they spoke more fluent the video could be well.organization is good.
ReplyDeleteAs its a news program Aysen should have introduced herself first and make a strong start, instead she gave too much information about organ donation. It seemed like a advertisement to inform people then a news program. It is a nice effort that you went to the hospital to record the video. See you next program should be, see you at the next program. I really liked the smooth transitions between the parts.
ReplyDeletetuba says we couldnt a donator for heart. We couldnt find a donator for his heart' is the right sentence. 'who experienced this condition' should be who experienced these situations. it is good that you took this video work seriously that you went to the hospital for that.
ReplyDeleteus ,students always doing that pronuonciation mistake. the /ı/ sound in "sick" shouldnt be pronounced the "i" sound as in turkish. it' d be better if we pronounce like a sound between "i" and "ı"
ReplyDeletehi friends, first of all your organization is good but there are some pronunciation mistakes such as "listen " and "sick" also there are some grammatical mistake and wrong word choice such as "auidence". In general it is a good video but you should be more careful about intonation and using gestures while speaking
ReplyDeletehi friends, your organization is good but there are some pronunciation and grammatical mistakes.and Aysen should have spoken less than the others.)
ReplyDeleteyour video is really good ı think. but ıt would be better ıf ayşen and hafize spoke fluently.
ReplyDeleteHi my friends; the video is really good but the first part is very long.
ReplyDeleteHi friends, the video is good.I liked the subject.The speaker is speaking fluently and the sound is good.But some time there is no intonation and stress...thank you
ReplyDeletehi friends ı think your organization is good in addition ı could not catch any grammatical mistake except for ''a few days ago my father has died'' . but ı really liked your job. thanks.
ReplyDeleteit is a good video and well-organized. ıt is creative =) but as far as ı can hear, there are some mistake. you should be careful while you are saying 'sick,listen' =)
ReplyDeletethere should have been a strong start and sometimes there is no intonation and stress but your organization is good and creative thanks
ReplyDeleteYou have an effective beginning before starting giving the news.At first,the camera should have been set in a higher place since the laptop on the table seemed bigger than the tv announcer.The correspondent should have been much more vivid and a bit lively.Also,'crucial' was not pronounced right..thanks for your effort,though..
ReplyDeleteat the beginning there is no intonation or stress.video is good and well organized.thanks
ReplyDeletehii, your topic "organ donation" is perfect. your job is the same as a real event i liked it very much but i think "has died" is a wrong using and your rising intonation is not perfect. thanks for your efforts :))
ReplyDeleteyour topic and construct is very good and impressive. when it comes to your pronounciation and intonation , they could be better .
ReplyDeleteHi friends ! Your topic was perfect. But the program had not a good start. There was no intonation. There were some mistakes like ' the situation cause' and some more like this. But your plan and organization were very creative! Thank you !
ReplyDeleteHello friens. Your place choice is really good :) I enjoyed your video. There are some pronunciation mistakes such as '' listen ''. Thanks your video :)
ReplyDeletethere are some grammatical mistakes especially in anchor's speech.The anchor said " the second reason is morally" but "morally" is adverb and it is not used here, but you can use "morality". Secondly, the tonation should be better, and the speech should be more fluent.
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