Thanks for your effort frinds.Be careful about intonation and fluency..You could have attracted the watchers much better with your video and your context...thanks.
hi friends,you look very natural.It was successful video.But there a re some pronounciation mistakes.derya should have said /ˈrɪəli/.damla should have said /han(d)ˈmeɪd/ /ˈpast(ə)l/.ayşen should have said /ˈgɔːdʒəs/.ın addition you used 'really' very much.thanks :)
Hi friends your video is well all in all except for a few pronunciation mistakes such as handmade, paste and also at the beginning you corrected we were instead of we are.
i liked that you made the video in an accessory shop which by the way was pronounced wrong it should have been "ak-ses-uh-ree" other then that the video had its natural flow. good job
It was a good video friends, intonation, indeed. :)You used the words related to the fashion such as trendy,backstage..it is a good point for a fashion programme. The word "handmade" was mispronounced but it didn't affect the video. Thank you :)
organisation is good."handmade"is wrong.thank you!
ReplyDeleteI liked your video. You pay attantion to intonation rules. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteThanks for your effort frinds.Be careful about intonation and fluency..You could have attracted the watchers much better with your video and your context...thanks.
ReplyDeleteThere is a pronunciation mistake:"pastel"
ReplyDeleteYour video is good.But there are some pronunciation mistakes,such as absolutely,handmade,pastel.
ReplyDeletehi friends. first of all,your video is good but there are some pronuncition mistakes such as handmade,paste.thanks
ReplyDeletei liked your video.it is really well organised.But you should be careful about the pauses.You did well, ;)
ReplyDeletehi friends,you look very natural.It was successful video.But there a re some pronounciation mistakes.derya should have said /ˈrɪəli/.damla should have said /han(d)ˈmeɪd/ /ˈpast(ə)l/.ayşen should have said /ˈgɔːdʒəs/.ın addition you used 'really' very much.thanks :)
ReplyDeleteHi friends your video is well all in all except for a few pronunciation mistakes such as handmade, paste and also at the beginning you corrected we were instead of we are.
ReplyDeleteHi! It is very good in terms of fluency, pronunciation and intonation overall, but please see:
ReplyDeleteHandmade /ˌhændˈmeɪd/
Just only this one (omit either “just” or “only”)
Thank you good job!
hi friends! your video is good But there are some pronunciation mistakes,such as absolutely,handmade,pastel. congrats
ReplyDeletehi girls ! your intonation is good and your video is well organized.congrats
ReplyDeletei liked that you made the video in an accessory shop which by the way was pronounced wrong it should have been "ak-ses-uh-ree" other then that the video had its natural flow. good job
ReplyDeletethank you for your effort the place you used is really gorgeous. I liked your video and found nice.
ReplyDeleteIt was a good video friends, intonation, indeed. :)You used the words related to the fashion such as trendy,backstage..it is a good point for a fashion programme. The word "handmade" was mispronounced but it didn't affect the video. Thank you :)
ReplyDeletehi friends I liked your video.I could not catch any mistakes thank you
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