your video is really good; fluency,intonation and how you used your body language,everything is noteworthy.there is only one grammar mistake that i heard."I am appreciate that for your attending".
congratulations friends...You were all very successful.I liked your fluency,intonation,and gestures...Just be careful when you are saying' I appreciate that for your attending.' You should have used a clause after 'that.' Thanks for your effort..
hi friends,you looked very professional.Your video was successful and your pronounciations were very well.But there are some mistakes.Seren should have said 'tells me' instead of 'tell'.Ebru should have said 'guests' and 'for you attendance'.thanks :)))
hi the pronunciation of colorful should have been kuhl-er-fuhl. you should be more careful about the pace of your speech which sometimes you get carried away and speak like you are in a hurry which makes you loose the control of the intonations. other than that it was well organized. thanks
hello friends. I felt as if I was watching a real fashion programme. the content is appropriate and also the materials you used. congratulations and thank you
organisation is very great,especially music:))intonations are very good.there is no grammer mistake.thank you!
ReplyDeleteyour video is very good but you made a pronunciation mistake while saying "thank you!"
ReplyDeleteyour video is really good; fluency,intonation and how you used your body language,everything is noteworthy.there is only one grammar mistake that i heard."I am appreciate that for your attending".
ReplyDeletecongratulations friends...You were all very successful.I liked your fluency,intonation,and gestures...Just be careful when you are saying' I appreciate that for your attending.' You should have used a clause after 'that.' Thanks for your effort..
ReplyDeleteThere is a pronunciation mistake:"confess". You speak clearly.
ReplyDeleteCongratulations Pretty women! :) I liked your video so much because of your gestures.. you were realy like a fashion designer!
ReplyDeleteYou all are very successful.Your organization is very good.To sum up,I liked it.
ReplyDeletehi friends. your organization is good.But there is a pronunciation mistake:"confess". thanks
ReplyDeleteCongratulations friends. I liked both your fluency and also the context of your video.Speech organisation also great ;)
ReplyDeletehi friends your pronunciation, desining,and fluency is great, thank you..
ReplyDeleteHi your fluency is good, and intonation also seems to be good.
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hi friends,you looked very professional.Your video was successful and your pronounciations were very well.But there are some mistakes.Seren should have said 'tells me' instead of 'tell'.Ebru should have said 'guests' and 'for you attendance'.thanks :)))
ReplyDeletehi friends! your video is very good but you should said /kənˈfɛs/ for confess. congrats
ReplyDeletehi girls :) congratulations.Your fluency,intonation and gestures are very good.thank you
ReplyDeletehi the pronunciation of colorful should have been kuhl-er-fuhl. you should be more careful about the pace of your speech which sometimes you get carried away and speak like you are in a hurry which makes you loose the control of the intonations. other than that it was well organized. thanks
ReplyDeletehello friends. I felt as if I was watching a real fashion programme. the content is appropriate and also the materials you used. congratulations and thank you
ReplyDeleteHello friends , even if i do not know much about the fashion i watched your video as i am watching a professional fashion show. congratulations again
ReplyDeletehi friends I liked your video.It is enjoyable.The organization is good.There is a pronunciation mistake "thank"... thank you
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