Thursday, April 5, 2012

Fashion

özlem Içken, Ebru Yılmaz, Mustafa Sazan

12 comments:

  1. you have made a good job by choosing the subject of "violence against women".there is a mistake,"harmony".thank you!

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  2. There is a grammatical mistake:"There are many violence..."

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  3. Congratulations friends. I liked both your fluency and also the context of your video..You should have said 'there is violence' because VIOLENCE= UNCOUNTABLE NOUN. Thanks for your effort.

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  4. Your video is good.I liked it.But,there is a grammatical mistake,such as "there are many violence against..."

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  5. hi friends . Your video is good but there is a grammatical mistake:" there are many violence..."

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  6. hi friends. your organization is good.Of course there are grammatical mistake but, personally, I don t care to it.Because as I thought the speaking via the target language is more significant for me ;)I mean, it is a good video.

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  7. Hİ fridens your topic and concept is great ,thank you...

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  8. Hi! Your intonation and fluency is good. Except the pronunciation of the word "Three /θriː/"

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  9. hello ! I liked your video and it is very good.congratulations

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  10. there were mistakes in your speech but it is obvious that you put too much time and effort while choosing your topic and you mentioned about an important issue. good job

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  11. hi everyone. congratulations friends your video is really great. thank for your effort.

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  12. hi friends there is a grammatical mistake "there are many violence" thank you

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