The format of your video is appropriate. I think you should pay attention to the fluency. As far as I can hear, there are some pronunciation mistakes for example, economic /,i:kǝ’nɒmık/
Different entrance to the video. It s nice. Apart form the previous videos ,using transitions are also good. However, in 2.47 part of the video, there is a general mistake done by most of us. Using wrong verb. They have used 'mix' for karıştırmak in turkish. On the other hand, if you are talking about meal or something like that, using 'stir' can be more appropriate.Eventually, it is a good video and good effort and job ! :)
You speak clearly but you could be more fluent and the organization is good. There are some mistakes like, the pronunciation of 'economic' and the word 'pratik'.
It is a good food video.Your speech is clear and understandable.There are some pronunciation mistakes such as economic.There aren't any grammatical mistakes.Thank you for your effort.
hi fırends fırst of all you made a mıstake about ıntonatıon'dıfferent kıtchen'.and you made also pronunciatıonal mıstakes for example 'economic','ingredients'.but your organization is good.you used transıtıon words
hi friends :) your video is enjoyful and well-prepared. steps are clear to understand.but you have some pronunciational mistakes such as "enjoy" "economic" "ingredient" "excuse" "pour"..thanks :)
hi friends,your video is well but there are some mistakes.In addition you used 'okay' constantly I think there is no need to use this word again and again.Cansu Kimsesiz should have said /rɪˈfrɪdʒəreɪtə/ instead of /refüdʒəreɪt/, /pan/ instead of /pen/,/ɪˈspɛʃ(ə)li/ instead of /eˈspɛʃ(ə)li/.In addition you should have said 'university student' instead of only 'student'.Cansu Temiz should have said a bottle of milk istead of a pocket of milk. thanks :)
hi friends, you all speak fluently, introduction part have catched my attention because it sounds like a real show but there are some pronunciational mistakes such as "economic, biscuits and ingredients" by the way I could not catch any grammatical mistake. It is clear that you have paid attention to right intonation and gesture.
hi friends.you video is good and you speak fluently.But I caught pronouncation mistakes in your speech,such as; refrigerator /rɪˈfrɪdʒ·əˌreɪt/, economic /,i:kǝ’nɒmık/.But the rest of the video is good.Thanks..
hi friends, first of all, all of you speak clearly .I could not catch any grammatical mistake.But there are some pronunciational mistakes such as economic,ingredient. thanks ))
hi frıends, you organized it well. there were some pronunciation mistakes such as 'economic,ingredients' and also the word 'PRATIC' should have been 'practical' anyway ı enjoyed while watching it thanks :)
when Dilay says "we are in another different kitchen" you made a repetition. "we are in another kitchen" was enough. I love cooking something every time is an inverted sentence. As in the ingredients, instead of using the word "pocket", it should have been "a pack of" because pocket means "cep" in Turkish.
the format of the video was appopriate but you should be more carefull with your choice of words and pronunciations. éit looks grateful" was one of them.
there are some pronunciation mistakes such as "economic, ingredients ", also ıt would be better ıf you used "pour "instead of "put"except them all the things were well.
your video is good but you made some pronunciatıonal mıstakes for example 'economic,practic' and you should be careful when you are saying 'something and thank' ı couldnt hear the sound of [θ]
except from grammatical mistakes there are some logic mistakes for example the chef did not do anything. another mistake you all use 'okay' too much I think you should pay attention to it.
you prepared a good programme for us thank you. ıts content was well-prepared but your intonation is weak and I prefer hearing more imperative sentences instead of long ones. thank you though.
you all are successful.but there are some pronunciation mistakes like tray/treı/.Also,"another cultures"is wrong.it should be "another culture".(duygu bastırma)
you are successful but there are some pronunciation mistakes such as "economic","pratik" etc.one of them said "another cultures".it is wrong.good job..
Fluency is good..You are so practical,good but be careful while you are saying 'economic,biscuits,again.Also,do not use ''ııı..'' while you are speaking..Good effort,thanks friends.
Hi friends .. I like your programme format .. ın general you made a good job except from some pronounciation mistakes like : again : /əˈgɛn, əˈgeɪn/ refrigerator : /rɪˈfrɪdʒəreɪtə/ continue : /kənˈtɪnjuː/ thanks !
you have a good organization, but there are some pronunciation mistakes at "economic, practic,refrigerator". and some grammatical mistakes like "lets go our oven".
The format of your video is appropriate. I think you should pay attention to the fluency. As far as I can hear, there are some pronunciation mistakes for example, economic /,i:kǝ’nɒmık/
ReplyDeleteDifferent entrance to the video. It s nice. Apart form the previous videos ,using transitions are also good. However, in 2.47 part of the video, there is a general mistake done by most of us. Using wrong verb. They have used 'mix' for karıştırmak in turkish. On the other hand, if you are talking about meal or something like that, using 'stir' can be more appropriate.Eventually, it is a good video and good effort and job ! :)
ReplyDeleteYou speak clearly but you could be more fluent and the organization is good. There are some mistakes like, the pronunciation of 'economic' and the word 'pratik'.
ReplyDeleteIt is a good food video.Your speech is clear and understandable.There are some pronunciation mistakes such as economic.There aren't any grammatical mistakes.Thank you for your effort.
ReplyDeleteThere are some pronunciation mistakes such as; /ˈbɪs·kɪt/and /rɪˈfrɪdʒ·əˌreɪt/. I think the organization is very well. Good job!
ReplyDeleteThere are some pronunciation mistakes as in "enjoy".
ReplyDeletehi guys your speech is understandable you give extra information which is good thanks:)
ReplyDeletehi friend your video is enjoyable but you have some pronunciation mistakes such as "again" thanks for your effort. good job.
ReplyDeletehi fırends fırst of all you made a mıstake about ıntonatıon'dıfferent kıtchen'.and you made also pronunciatıonal mıstakes for example 'economic','ingredients'.but your organization is good.you used transıtıon words
ReplyDeletehi friends :) your video is enjoyful and well-prepared. steps are clear to understand.but you have some pronunciational mistakes such as "enjoy" "economic" "ingredient" "excuse" "pour"..thanks :)
ReplyDeletehi guys i like your work it was really enjoyful also organization of your speech was good i could'nt catch any grammatical mistakes thanks!!
ReplyDeleteYour video is good and you speak clearly.There are some mistakes such as thank,something and biscuit.
ReplyDeletehi friends,your video is well but there are some mistakes.In addition you used 'okay' constantly I think there is no need to use this word again and again.Cansu Kimsesiz should have said /rɪˈfrɪdʒəreɪtə/ instead of /refüdʒəreɪt/, /pan/ instead of /pen/,/ɪˈspɛʃ(ə)li/ instead of /eˈspɛʃ(ə)li/.In addition you should have said 'university student' instead of only 'student'.Cansu Temiz should have said a bottle of milk istead of a pocket of milk. thanks :)
ReplyDeletehi friends, you all speak fluently, introduction part have catched my attention because it sounds like a real show but there are some pronunciational mistakes such as "economic, biscuits and ingredients" by the way I could not catch any grammatical mistake. It is clear that you have paid attention to right intonation and gesture.
ReplyDeletehi friends.you video is good and you speak fluently.But I caught pronouncation mistakes in your speech,such as; refrigerator /rɪˈfrɪdʒ·əˌreɪt/,
ReplyDeleteeconomic /,i:kǝ’nɒmık/.But the rest of the video is good.Thanks..
hi friends, first of all, all of you speak clearly .I could not catch any grammatical mistake.But there are some pronunciational mistakes such as economic,ingredient. thanks ))
ReplyDeletehi frıends, you organized it well. there were some pronunciation mistakes such as 'economic,ingredients' and also the word 'PRATIC' should have been 'practical' anyway ı enjoyed while watching it thanks :)
ReplyDeletewhen Dilay says "we are in another different kitchen" you made a repetition. "we are in another kitchen" was enough. I love cooking something every time is an inverted sentence. As in the ingredients, instead of using the word "pocket", it should have been "a pack of" because pocket means "cep" in Turkish.
ReplyDeletethe format of the video was appopriate but you should be more carefull with your choice of words and pronunciations. éit looks grateful" was one of them.
ReplyDeletethe format of your video is apporiate, but you should be more fluent. there are some pronunciatical mistake like economic, biscuits.
ReplyDeletethere are some pronunciation mistakes such as "economic, ingredients ", also ıt would be better ıf you used "pour "instead of "put"except them all the things were well.
ReplyDeleteyour video is good but you made some pronunciatıonal mıstakes for example 'economic,practic' and you should be careful when you are saying 'something and thank' ı couldnt hear the sound of [θ]
ReplyDeletethere are grammatical faults:
ReplyDelete'let's go our oven','another cultures'.
there are also pronunciational mistakes:
'econimic','should'.
But,i liked it.
except from grammatical mistakes there are some logic mistakes for example the chef did not do anything. another mistake you all use 'okay' too much I think you should pay attention to it.
ReplyDeletehi my friends, it is well-organized,but "economic" and "again" are pronounced wrongly.also you should have used "practical".
ReplyDeleteHi. Please see the pronunciation of these words: economic, packet, the, then and pour. Intonation can be developed.
ReplyDeleteexcept your pronunciation mistakes such as economic,should,again,continue,refrigirator... it's a good video,thanks...
ReplyDeleteyou prepared a good programme for us thank you. ıts content was well-prepared but your intonation is weak and I prefer hearing more imperative sentences instead of long ones. thank you though.
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ReplyDeleteyou all are successful.but there are some pronunciation mistakes like tray/treı/.Also,"another cultures"is wrong.it should be "another culture".(duygu bastırma)
ReplyDeleteyou are successful but there are some pronunciation mistakes such as "economic","pratik" etc.one of them said "another cultures".it is wrong.good job..
ReplyDeleteFluency is good..You are so practical,good but be careful while you are saying 'economic,biscuits,again.Also,do not use ''ııı..'' while you are speaking..Good effort,thanks friends.
ReplyDeleteyou all speak fluently but there are some pronounciation mistakes.however,the video is nice and well-prepared..congratulations.
ReplyDeletehello girls, except from the pronounciation of "economic" and "thank" everyhing is good. be careful /ˌiːkəˈnɒmɪk/ and /θaŋk/ ;)
ReplyDeletehi friends your video is good but i wish you were careful about pronounciation such as economic congratulations
ReplyDeleteHi friends .. I like your programme format ..
ReplyDeleteın general you made a good job except from some pronounciation mistakes like :
again : /əˈgɛn, əˈgeɪn/
refrigerator : /rɪˈfrɪdʒəreɪtə/
continue : /kənˈtɪnjuː/
thanks !
Hi friens! In spite of some pronounciation mistakes like 'again and continue' I liked your video. At least I could hear you clearly ! Thank you.
ReplyDeleteThere are some pronunciation mistakes such as thank..But i liked it thank you friends
ReplyDeleteyour steps of organization are good.except for some pronounciation mistakes such as chef ,ecenomic ı really liked it conguralations.
ReplyDeleteyou have a good organization, but there are some pronunciation mistakes at "economic, practic,refrigerator". and some grammatical mistakes like "lets go our oven".
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