joyful video ! However,using transition could make it more understandable.because as we know, food programs consist of some steps. And so, emphasizing these steps could make it more than this.All in all,it is well-organized video and enjoyable. ;)
your intonation and pronounciation are nice. your speeches are understood easily. also transitions are clear. although there so many steps, they can be followed. thanks for your presentation.
as ıt was said before your organization ıs really good.but while applying the steps you could talk about extra ınformatıon or you could gıve some tips.I couldn't catch any grammatical or pronuncational mistake.thanks for it.
hi friends :)ı liked your video because the steps are clear and your organization is good.ı couldn't catch any grammatical mistake but you should be careful the pronunciation of "about".thanks :)
hi guys your video is fairly succesful and enjoyable.your speeches are fluent and clear. there aren't pronunciation mistakes but ı must confess that ı have never seen using a glaas jar to crush nut :D
hi friends,the organization of your video is so well.You spoke very fluently and clearly.It is easy to understand.I couldn't catch any mistakes in your speech.thanks :)
hi friends your video is very effective and interesting. I think there is no pronunciational or grammatical mistake. You all speak fluently there is no pause. Organization of steps is comprhensible.
the idea of beginning the program in a shopping center is really nice , congrtulations your intonations are very clear and good. but if you spoke more while making the cake , your video could be much more enjoyable..
your intonation and pronounciation are good and understandable easily but when you were making the cake you should have gıven some tips as in food programs. congrats friends
I liked your video . but I realized some mistakes such as "banana". you used as "be`nana" instead of "bı`nana"and I wish you had used some materials to emphasize to cook a cake. than you
It is a well organized program;nonetheless,it would have been much better if you had spoken while you were preparing the cake.As a result, there would not have been silence during the preparation..Besides,be careful while you pronounce the word :'other'..Also,I couldn't see Gizem during the preparation period.. Anyway,congratulations friends..
hii girls,it look likes very delicious, i will cook it tomorrow. i can not hear any mistakes but you should speak during cooking it. i liked it so much congrulationsss :))
yes this video made me bake a cholat cake recipe was simple and pronuonced clearly, i didnt hear any obvious mistake so that was plain and simple. GO ON GIRLS!!!! :d
hi friends! I liked your video so much, it is really good recipe,except from some pronounciation mistakes like 'other, cake' the video is worth watching! Thank you!
your beginning is very nice and the first speakers ( sorry but l don't know your name) speech, fluency and intonation is succesfull. second part of the video is successfull as well, but you shoul have used transition words.
Hi friends I should say that i am effected in a good way of your video .it was really good for being realistic for example buying the ingredients from the market.
Your organization is really good; enjoyable and clear. It is easy to understand. Additionally, I have admit that your cake is mouth-watering :)
ReplyDeletejoyful video ! However,using transition could make it more understandable.because as we know, food programs consist of some steps. And so, emphasizing these steps could make it more than this.All in all,it is well-organized video and enjoyable. ;)
ReplyDeleteyour intonation and pronounciation are nice. your speeches are understood easily. also transitions are clear. although there so many steps, they can be followed. thanks for your presentation.
ReplyDeleteas ıt was said before your organization ıs really good.but while applying the steps you could talk about extra ınformatıon or you could gıve some tips.I couldn't catch any grammatical or pronuncational mistake.thanks for it.
ReplyDeleteThe organization of your video is good and you speak clearly and fluently.
ReplyDeleteIt is a good video but there are some intonation mistakes.
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ReplyDeletegood job my friends :)
ReplyDeletehi my friends; your speech is clear there is no grammatical mistake
ReplyDeletegood job. thanks :)
hi guys i like your video i couldnt catch any grammatical and pronunciation mistake thanks
ReplyDeletehi friends :)ı liked your video because the steps are clear and your organization is good.ı couldn't catch any grammatical mistake but you should be careful the pronunciation of "about".thanks :)
ReplyDeletehi guys your video is fairly succesful and enjoyable.your speeches are fluent and clear. there aren't pronunciation mistakes but ı must confess that ı have never seen using a glaas jar to crush nut :D
ReplyDeletehi friends i like your work it was funny i couldn't catch any grammatical mistake also pronunciation was correct thanks!!
ReplyDeletehi friends,the organization of your video is so well.You spoke very fluently and clearly.It is easy to understand.I couldn't catch any mistakes in your speech.thanks :)
ReplyDeleteit is a well-organize video.I enjoyed while I was watching.I couldn't catch any gramatical mistakes and your intonation is good .thanks..
ReplyDeleteIt is a good video and your speeches are easily understandable.
ReplyDeletehi friends.Esra and Gizem spoke fluently. There aren't any grammatical mistakes in their speech.I really like their speech.thanks.
ReplyDeletehi friends your video is very effective and interesting. I think there is no pronunciational or grammatical mistake. You all speak fluently there is no pause. Organization of steps is comprhensible.
ReplyDeletehi friends, first of all, it is a good video and your speeches are really understanable.there are not any grammatical mistakes.thanks :)
ReplyDeletehi friends, you all spoke fluently and the steps you gave us were comprehensible thanks a lot
ReplyDeletehi friends first of all it is well organization. your speech is so clear. ı couldnt catch any grammatical and pronunciational mistake.. thanks..
ReplyDeletehi friends, your organization is good. your speech is understanable. there is no gramatical or pronunciational mistake. thanks =)
ReplyDeletehi friends, your video is really good ;) it continues step by step and it is very understandable. Thanks a lot
ReplyDeletethe idea of beginning the program in a shopping center is really nice , congrtulations your intonations are very clear and good. but if you spoke more while making the cake , your video could be much more enjoyable..
ReplyDeleteyour vide is really good.intonations are clear.there no grammer mistake.congraculations!
ReplyDeleteexcept for the poor video quality in first section everything is great , there is no major pronounciation and grammatical mistake. liked it,well done.
ReplyDeleteyour intonation and pronounciation are good and understandable easily but when you were making the cake you should have gıven some tips as in food programs. congrats friends
ReplyDeleteexcept from some technical problems it is really good. congratulations!
ReplyDeletehi my friends, ı think it's well organized especially introduction part.also your pronunciation and intonation are good.
ReplyDeleteyour video is well-organized, i enjoyed while watching.You spoke very fluently and clearly..
ReplyDeleteThx for your performance. I find the intonation and pronunciation good, but please check out the pronunciation of the word "other".
ReplyDeletegenerally the video and all your pronunciation are good except for the word 'other'. congratulations...
ReplyDeleteI liked your video . but I realized some mistakes such as "banana". you used as "be`nana" instead of "bı`nana"and I wish you had used some materials to emphasize to cook a cake. than you
ReplyDeleteYou all speak fluently.but you should have talked about your cake while you were preparing your cake or using ingredients. (duygu bastırma)
ReplyDeleteyour video is very good but in my opinion your voice system could be better. thank you.
ReplyDeleteIt is a well organized program;nonetheless,it would have been much better if you had spoken while you were preparing the cake.As a result, there would not have been silence during the preparation..Besides,be careful while you pronounce the word :'other'..Also,I couldn't see Gizem during the preparation period.. Anyway,congratulations friends..
ReplyDeleteyour speech is good and understandable and the video is well-organized.congratulations.
ReplyDeletehii girls,it look likes very delicious, i will cook it tomorrow. i can not hear any mistakes but you should speak during cooking it. i liked it so much congrulationsss :))
ReplyDeleteyour speech and pronounciation are good and the video is also well organized.
ReplyDeleteyour organization was so good, ı cant find any mistakes,also all of your pronouncations are very clear.
ReplyDeletehi friends , its good job except pronuncation of 'other'.Your intonation is great. Congratulations!!!
ReplyDeletethis is a well organized video !! I like it ..
ReplyDeletethanks and congratulations :)
your video is great,well-organised congratulations
ReplyDeleteyes this video made me bake a cholat cake recipe was simple and pronuonced clearly, i didnt hear any obvious mistake so that was plain and simple. GO ON GIRLS!!!! :d
ReplyDeletehi friends! I liked your video so much, it is really good recipe,except from some pronounciation mistakes like 'other, cake' the video is worth watching! Thank you!
ReplyDeletehi friends,I liked your video.It is well-organised.But you should speak while preparing it and also you should use some transitions words
ReplyDeleteyour beginning is very nice and the first speakers ( sorry but l don't know your name) speech, fluency and intonation is succesfull. second part of the video is successfull as well, but you shoul have used transition words.
ReplyDeleteHi friends I should say that i am effected in a good way of your video .it was really good for being realistic for example buying the ingredients from the market.
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