As general,video is very good.Congratulations !However,Sevinç's voice might be more vivid.Moreover, I couldn't heard Alper and Mustafa's voices entirely because of the sound of sea. (Merve İspir)
Organization is so good, but I couldn’t hear Mustafa because of the sound of sea. Sevinç should be vivid; her speech sounds weak. As far as I can hear there are some pronunciation mistakes such as stadium /’steıdiǝm/ , and olimpic /ǝ’lımpık/.
Well work. I really liked this one but the problem caused by sea sound made Mustafa's voice unhearable. Except this everything is fine, especially the organization is PERFECT.
Mustafa and Alper's voice cannot be heard because of the sea sound and Sevinç's speech could be more clear but these things don't overshadow your success especially as being the first video.Congratulations.
Live broadcast is very good but Sevinç could be more active. I can't hear Mustafa and Alper's voice because of the sea.There are some mistakes such as learning,morning etc.But generally video is good.Congratulations!
the organization is good but as far as ı catch you have some pronunciation mistakes in some words such as organization,connect,mediterranean, ... moreover "corresponder" should be changed with "correspondent" because there isn't a word like this in English.your voices are not clear because there is too much noise around you.
hi friends, Sevinç's speech is very clear but she spoke slowly.She should have said /kəmˈpɛtɪtə/ instead of /komˈpɛtɪtə/.Mustafa's voice couldn't be understood because of wave.Alper should have said /ˌmɛdɪtəˈreɪnɪən/ instead of /ˌmɛdɪtəˈrən/.In addition your video was left half finished.there might be a problem.thanks :)
Hello my friends ! In my opinion Sevinç must to be more careful about her pronounciation and I couldn't hear Alper's and Mehmet's voices because of the sea sound . You should have choosen more suitable place than the seaside in order to make a good and clear speech . Beside these the topic is good and you introduced it very well . Thank you for your performances .
hi my friends !your video is good and your issue is related to our city and you must have caught the audience attention easily.But I have to say that , If Miss Acar spoke more fluently,the news would be performed well and besides,I had a hard time to hear Mrs.Sazan's voice but apart all of this things,you had a good job .thanks..
it is agood idea to use the natıural enviroment ibut it really affected your video. in some places you talked in the same line thre was no intonation. thank you.
except from the sea sound,Sevinç’s slow speech and some pronunciation mistakes ,everyting is okay.you chose a good topic and nice place. I wish endless success to you..
hi friends, live broadcast was very nice,but ı couldn't hear you clearly due to the noise. Sevinç was very slow while speaking. in general it was good.
I really like your video.Your atmosphere is very good.Sevinç should have spoken more fluently. Because of wave,Icouldn't hear Mustafa's voice.Alper is very good at using gestures and eye contact.Thanks.
Firstly, your topic and setting is good. But because of the waves I couldn't hear mustafa's voice. In addition I couldn't understand how Alper do know Mustafa's name without asking him. Except from these it is good, congratulations.
i think your introduction is good and it is a well thought scene but sevinç should have paid attention to intonation. she is speaking as if she is reading. [projekt] should be [pracekt]. mustafa has the spirit that makes the video fine but as my friends said, i had trouble with hearing mustafa. Thus, i cannot say anything about him.
Sevinc lacks a bit of enthusiasm when she performs, and her speech could have been more fluent.Alper's pronunciation of the word stadium sounded a lot like Turkish. Nice topic which grabs attention of the audience. Live broadcast idea should have been better if you considered the sound of the waves.
hi guys first of all i had really difficulyt in listening to you because of the sea's waves.and i wished sevinç to speak more fluently however thanks for your video.
hi friends,by and large,it is good to use the opportunity to use the places for your news.but the bad side is that i can not hear your voice well.That's why i have difficulty to comment on your performance ..as for sevinc,she should have been more fluent ...anyway thanks for your labor.
if we talk about news, it should draw the viewer's attention for me,the speaker 's voice hasnt have this quality.all in all,her speech can understood word by word.
hi frıends fırst of all your speech could be more fluent.you made some pronuncational mıstakes for example'obtain','colour','technological'.organization is good.thanks for it.
the organization is well friends but the sound of the sea makes Alper's and Mustafa's voice unhearable and there are some minor pronuncational mistakes such as 'color'.
Congratulations Sevinç,Alper and Mustafa!Although you were the first group to present and had no experiences in advance,i think you did well;however,Sevinç should have been much more fluently and should have gestured a bit more as a tv announcer.(the pen in her hand shouldn't have been stuck in her hand without any motion.Alper is quite understandable and has a clear voice.Mustafa' s voice;however,isn't clear because of the sound of the waves.So,maybe,it could have been better if the organization had been organized distant from the sea.Thanks.
hello everybody, it is a good job but i think there are some small grammatical mistakes for example, not the preparation have already.. you should the preparations have already... and because of the voice of waves i can not hear you easily.All in all, thanks for your efforts :)
Hi guys ! I liked your video so much. The idea is really creative. Although there are some gramatical mistakes, the video is worth watching !! Congratulations!
Hi friends, yoour place choice is not suitable for a good video. However, you organized it very well. Except for some pronunciation mistakes, everything is good. Thanks..
hi, your organization is very good, but there is a problem with sound because of the waves, so l have a trouble with hearing your pronunciation exactly. Also,Sevinç's speak is clear but she should be a litle vivid.
There are good introduction and supporting information. They speak clearly but the sound of the sea makes it hard to understand what they are saying.
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ReplyDeleteAs general,video is very good.Congratulations !However,Sevinç's voice might be more vivid.Moreover, I couldn't heard Alper and Mustafa's voices entirely because of the sound of sea.
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you all are successful but sevinç should have spoken fluently because she doesn't inform us about a disaster.
ReplyDeleteTopic of the video and the way they tell us is good but as a
ReplyDeletenarrator of the news, Sevinç could speak more fluently.
Alper pronounced the word "colour" in a wrong way.
ReplyDeleteBeginning and feedback is really good and the idea to record the video outside is brilliant but the waves'voice block Alper and Mustafa's sound.
ReplyDeleteOrganization is so good, but I couldn’t hear Mustafa because of the sound of sea. Sevinç should be vivid; her speech sounds weak. As far as I can hear there are some pronunciation mistakes such as stadium /’steıdiǝm/ , and olimpic /ǝ’lımpık/.
ReplyDeleteWell work. I really liked this one but the problem caused by sea sound made Mustafa's voice unhearable. Except this everything is fine, especially the organization is PERFECT.
ReplyDeleteMustafa and Alper's voice cannot be heard because of the sea sound and Sevinç's speech could be more clear but these things don't overshadow your success especially as being the first video.Congratulations.
ReplyDeleteLive broadcast is very good but Sevinç could be more active. I can't hear Mustafa and Alper's voice because of the sea.There are some mistakes such as learning,morning etc.But generally video is
ReplyDeletegood.Congratulations!
the organization is good but as far as ı catch you have some pronunciation mistakes in some words such as organization,connect,mediterranean, ... moreover "corresponder" should be changed with "correspondent" because there isn't a word like this in English.your voices are not clear because there is too much noise around you.
ReplyDeletehi friends, Sevinç's speech is very clear but she spoke slowly.She should have said /kəmˈpɛtɪtə/ instead of /komˈpɛtɪtə/.Mustafa's voice couldn't be understood because of wave.Alper should have said /ˌmɛdɪtəˈreɪnɪən/ instead of /ˌmɛdɪtəˈrən/.In addition your video was left half finished.there might be a problem.thanks :)
ReplyDeleteHello my friends ! In my opinion Sevinç must to be more careful about her pronounciation and I couldn't hear Alper's and Mehmet's voices because of the sea sound . You should have choosen more suitable place than the seaside in order to make a good and clear speech . Beside these the topic is good and you introduced it very well . Thank you for your performances .
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ReplyDeleteThank you for preparing this video. I see pronunciation mistakes, maybe you can take care of them.
ReplyDeletehi my friends !your video is good and your issue is related to our city and you must have caught the audience attention easily.But I have to say that , If Miss Acar spoke more fluently,the news would be performed well and besides,I had a hard time to hear Mrs.Sazan's voice but apart all of this things,you had a good job .thanks..
ReplyDeletethe video's topic is well ,generally well organized but mustafa's and the rest part of alper's speech can not be heard easily ,thanks
ReplyDeleteit is agood idea to use the natıural enviroment ibut it really affected your video. in some places you talked in the same line thre was no intonation. thank you.
ReplyDeleteexcept from the sea sound,Sevinç’s slow speech and some pronunciation mistakes ,everyting is okay.you chose a good topic and nice place. I wish endless success to you..
ReplyDeletehi friends, live broadcast was very nice,but ı couldn't hear you clearly due to the noise. Sevinç was very slow while speaking. in general it was good.
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ReplyDeleteI really like your video.Your atmosphere is very good.Sevinç should have spoken more fluently. Because of wave,Icouldn't hear Mustafa's voice.Alper is very good at using gestures and eye contact.Thanks.
ReplyDeleteFirstly, your topic and setting is good. But because of the waves I couldn't hear mustafa's voice. In addition I couldn't understand how Alper do know Mustafa's name without asking him. Except from these it is good, congratulations.
ReplyDeletei think your introduction is good and it is a well thought scene but sevinç should have paid attention to intonation. she is speaking as if she is reading. [projekt] should be [pracekt]. mustafa has the spirit that makes the video fine but as my friends said, i had trouble with hearing mustafa. Thus, i cannot say anything about him.
ReplyDeleteit is good but the sounds of wave prevent to hear mustafa's voice and sevinç shouldn't speak more slowly.
ReplyDeleteSevinc lacks a bit of enthusiasm when she performs, and her speech could have been more fluent.Alper's pronunciation of the word stadium sounded a lot like Turkish. Nice topic which grabs attention of the audience. Live broadcast idea should have been better if you considered the sound of the waves.
ReplyDeletehi guys i like your work i could'nt catch any grammatical mistakes also rate of spech was good
ReplyDeletehi guys first of all i had really difficulyt in listening to you because of the sea's waves.and i wished sevinç to speak more fluently however thanks for your video.
ReplyDeletehi my friends your topic is good but Sevinç should care about intonation.except from the sound of sea ı liked your video. thanks
ReplyDeletehi friends,by and large,it is good to use the opportunity to use the places for your news.but the bad side is that i can not hear your voice well.That's why i have difficulty to comment on your performance ..as for sevinc,she should have been more fluent ...anyway thanks for your labor.
ReplyDeleteif we talk about news, it should draw the viewer's attention for me,the speaker 's voice hasnt have this quality.all in all,her speech can understood word by word.
ReplyDeleteAs to me your organization is good but I couldn’t hear your voices because of the sound of sea. Sevinç's speech sounds must be fluent.
ReplyDeleteyour organization is vey good but sevinç should have spoken more fluently and ı couldn't hear mustafa.alper is successful.
ReplyDeleteThe things that strike me most are sevinç's right hand and the sound of the sea:)
ReplyDeletethe organization is good.But there is no intonation in sevinç's speaking and Alper's and Mustafa's sound is not clear because of the sea.
ReplyDeletehi frıends fırst of all your speech could be more fluent.you made some pronuncational mıstakes for example'obtain','colour','technological'.organization is good.thanks for it.
ReplyDeletethe organization is well friends but the sound of the sea makes Alper's and Mustafa's voice unhearable and there are some minor pronuncational mistakes such as 'color'.
ReplyDeleteCongratulations Sevinç,Alper and Mustafa!Although you were the first group to present and had no experiences in advance,i think you did well;however,Sevinç should have been much more fluently and should have gestured a bit more as a tv announcer.(the pen in her hand shouldn't have been stuck in her hand without any motion.Alper is quite understandable and has a clear voice.Mustafa' s voice;however,isn't clear because of the sound of the waves.So,maybe,it could have been better if the organization had been organized distant from the sea.Thanks.
ReplyDeletehello everybody, it is a good job but i think there are some small grammatical mistakes for example, not the preparation have already.. you should the preparations have already... and because of the voice of waves i can not hear you easily.All in all, thanks for your efforts :)
ReplyDeleteyour topic and organization is very good but i couldn't hear well because there is a problem with sound. Mustafa's words are not understandable
ReplyDeleteHi guys ! I liked your video so much. The idea is really creative. Although there are some gramatical mistakes, the video is worth watching !! Congratulations!
ReplyDeleteHi friends, yoour place choice is not suitable for a good video. However, you organized it very well. Except for some pronunciation mistakes, everything is good. Thanks..
ReplyDeletehi, your organization is very good, but there is a problem with sound because of the waves, so l have a trouble with hearing your pronunciation exactly. Also,Sevinç's speak is clear but she should be a litle vivid.
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