He said that night my wife ''insist ''on watching a movie.In this sentence,he should have used the simple past tense.''Insıst on'' should have been ''insisted on''.However,the topic of the video is very interesting and I really like video.
hi my friends,your video is good and well-organized.I like it.But there are few mistakes in your speech.Generally you didn't make pronounciation mistakes.But Dilek should have said /ˈdeɪli/ instead of /ˈdaɪli/ and she should have said '' we shock everyone'' instead of ''we shocked''.Her speech's input and output are suitable for the news television programme.Hasan should have said ''she insisted on watching...'' instead of ''insist on...''.I think Dilay's pronounciation is perfect but she used ''gosh'' very much.I think there isn't need to use this word consistently. thanks :)
As far as I have concern, the first and the beginning part was really good. It seemed me enough professional. On the other hand, the last part, the interview, may be more sophisticated. What I mean is this, the last part could be done more understandable and the face could be seen by the audiences. Thanks to;hassan ,dilay, dilek for video :)
hi my friends :) you have some grammatical mistakes.and correspondent uses "gosh" nearly in every sentence.she shouldn't have used it a lot.except for these,your matter is interesting and organization is well-prepared.thanks :)
Hello my friends ! Your topic is so good :) But The correspondent almost used in her all sentences ''Oh Gosh '' but this a news and discussions video so you shouldn't use slang words . Except from this it is a good video . Thank you
I could only hear the tv announcer. She said listen without its prepostion "to", and she should pay attention to both pronunciation and intonation. Thx for preparing it.
thank you it is a good video but you said "my wife punch to my eyes" dont use "to" after " punch"and the reaction the correspondent showed was exaggerated.
the topic is interesting.I didn’t understand why the correspondent put the microphone on the table.I am not sure but as i heard she said “then what happens?”,it had to be “happened”. Anyway,i liked it.
The topic is really interesting, I liked it very much. You did some grammatical mistakes and I the correspounder put the microphone on the table while she is still talking it was a bit strange. Anyway I liked it well done!
dilay says waitin'k' and than she says in order to learn your event. she should have said incident instead of event. and then hasan says i feel very terrible. i feel terrible would be enough. he didn't stick with the script maybe because he couldn't memorize it. he says 'she beated me up a heavy thing' i wish that you rehearsed more times and said logical things.
At the beginning of the video you wrote victim as Edward Johnson but in the actual recording you introduced him as Eric . The pronunciation mistake saying "beaten" wrong when she tells the story sounds like "bitten" which makes confusions. When hasan said 'she insisted i wanted' should have been 'she insisted i rejected' or something like that. And Dilay commented 'it is really fantastic' which is not a proper choice of word at all in this incident.
hi friends; it is clear that you have prepared enough for this video, your organization is good you had some technical problems at the beginning with the introduction. dilay's pronunciation and intonation is very good. There are some grammatical mistakes with the tense choice.
your video is good except from some grammar mistakes.dilay's pronunciation is perfect.but ı think " it is really fantastic" is not a suitable comment for this situation.
hi friends,the subject is good.But there are some speaking mistakes.and when Hasan was talking,he always said the same things again and again...but generally good thank you
it is a good video and ı can understand that you all have prepared enough for this video. but there are some mistakes in grammer. you used both present and past time in your sentence. thanks =)
In general,it is a good work,friends,but there are some mistakes: you should have said 'at my home' not ' in my home.Be careful also while you are using tenses,and also 'news' should have pronounced as (nju:z)..thanks..
hello everybody :) i liked your news especially interview part. i think, you should be care that pronuounciation of 'th'. you should say "θ" not to "t". good job ;)
Hi friends ! I liked your topic but I couldn't hear exactly the interview part. In addition to this as it was news and discussion program I think that you shouldn't have used 'Ooo Gosh' so much. Thank yo!
your topic is interesting and creative but you should have paid more attention to your grammer... and yhere were some pronunciational mistakes such as news and besides this the correspondent used 'oh gosh' nearly all in her sentences, i think it's a bit irritating...
The topic is attention-getting and creative, also l like correspondent's pronunciation. However,anchorman should be more fluently.There is no tense agreement ın some part of your speech especially "past and present tenses" should be used more crefully while talking about this kind of incident, because incident generally happens in past.
"in my home" should be "at my home".
ReplyDeleteIn the middle of the video, the correspondent said 'whats happened to you?' and 'whats' should be 'what' but it is an interesting and good video.
ReplyDeleteHe said that night my wife ''insist ''on watching a movie.In this sentence,he should have used the simple past tense.''Insıst on'' should have been ''insisted on''.However,the topic of the video is very interesting and I really like video.
ReplyDeleteHasan used "simple present tense" and "simple past tense" at the same time in his speech.
ReplyDeleteIt is an interesting topic, but you did some mistakes about usage of present tense and past tense.
ReplyDeleteexcept from the use of grammatical structures wrongly , well done ,cogratulations
Deletehi my friends,your video is good and well-organized.I like it.But there are few mistakes in your speech.Generally you didn't make pronounciation mistakes.But Dilek should have said /ˈdeɪli/ instead of /ˈdaɪli/ and she should have said '' we shock everyone'' instead of ''we shocked''.Her speech's input and output are suitable for the news television programme.Hasan should have said ''she insisted on watching...'' instead of ''insist on...''.I think Dilay's pronounciation is perfect but she used ''gosh'' very much.I think there isn't need to use this word consistently. thanks :)
ReplyDeleteAs far as I have concern, the first and the beginning part was really good. It seemed me enough professional. On the other hand, the last part, the interview, may be more sophisticated. What I mean is this, the last part could be done more understandable and the face could be seen by the audiences. Thanks to;hassan ,dilay, dilek for video :)
ReplyDeletehi my friends :) you have some grammatical mistakes.and correspondent uses "gosh" nearly in every sentence.she shouldn't have used it a lot.except for these,your matter is interesting and organization is well-prepared.thanks :)
ReplyDeleteHello my friends ! Your topic is so good :) But The correspondent almost used in her all sentences ''Oh Gosh '' but this a news and discussions video so you shouldn't use slang words . Except from this it is a good video . Thank you
ReplyDeleteI could only hear the tv announcer. She said listen without its prepostion "to", and she should pay attention to both pronunciation and intonation. Thx for preparing it.
ReplyDeletethank you it is a good video but you said "my wife punch to my eyes" dont use "to" after " punch"and the reaction the correspondent showed was exaggerated.
ReplyDeletethe topic is interesting.I didn’t understand why the correspondent put the microphone on the table.I am not sure but as i heard she said “then what happens?”,it had to be “happened”. Anyway,i liked it.
ReplyDeletehi,there were some mistakes while speaking (past tense and s.present tense)but you chose an interesting topic.thanks...
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ReplyDeletehi my friends,the video is very creative. you should care about usage of present tense and past tense. except from this ı liked your video. thanks
ReplyDeleteThe topic is really interesting, I liked it very much. You did some grammatical mistakes and I the correspounder put the microphone on the table while she is still talking it was a bit strange. Anyway I liked it well done!
ReplyDeletedilay says waitin'k' and than she says in order to learn your event. she should have said incident instead of event. and then hasan says i feel very terrible. i feel terrible would be enough. he didn't stick with the script maybe because he couldn't memorize it. he says 'she beated me up a heavy thing' i wish that you rehearsed more times and said logical things.
ReplyDeleteAt the beginning of the video you wrote victim as Edward Johnson but in the actual recording you introduced him as Eric . The pronunciation mistake saying "beaten" wrong when she tells the story sounds like "bitten" which makes confusions. When hasan said 'she insisted i wanted' should have been 'she insisted i rejected' or something like that. And Dilay commented 'it is really fantastic' which is not a proper choice of word at all in this incident.
ReplyDeletehi guys i like ur work it was very nice ur tonation was good and correct thanks!
ReplyDeletehi guys i cought some grammatical mistakes.dilek should have used "to"after "listen "word. but i like your video thanks..
ReplyDeletehi friends; it is clear that you have prepared enough for this video, your organization is good you had some technical problems at the beginning with the introduction. dilay's pronunciation and intonation is very good. There are some grammatical mistakes with the tense choice.
ReplyDeleteyour video is good except from some grammar mistakes.dilay's pronunciation is perfect.but ı think " it is really fantastic" is not a suitable comment for this situation.
ReplyDeletehi friends.It was a good video.There is a grammatical mistake.Your topic is interesting.Thanks.
ReplyDeletehi friends; i liked the organization, especiallay the beginning part. There are some mistakes of word and tense choices.
ReplyDeletehi friends,the subject is good.But there are some speaking mistakes.and when Hasan was talking,he always said the same things again and again...but generally good thank you
ReplyDeletehi friends your organization is so good. your speech is clear and exept for some pronunciational mistakes ı liked your job thankss
ReplyDeleteit is a good video and ı can understand that you all have prepared enough for this video. but there are some mistakes in grammer. you used both present and past time in your sentence. thanks =)
ReplyDeletehasaan u had some minor grammatical mistakes but you're a legend as usuaaaal well done! :D
ReplyDeleteyour topic is very creative friends but there are some mistakes in using tenses.
ReplyDeleteIn general,it is a good work,friends,but there are some mistakes: you should have said 'at my home' not ' in my home.Be careful also while you are using tenses,and also 'news' should have pronounced as (nju:z)..thanks..
ReplyDeletevideo is good but there are some mistakes such as "whats happened to you".corresponder shouldn't say "gosh" .''insisted " is wrong
ReplyDeletehello everybody :) i liked your news especially interview part. i think, you should be care that pronuounciation of 'th'. you should say "θ" not to "t". good job ;)
ReplyDeletethere are some grammatical mistakes for example; in my home should be at my home.
ReplyDeleteHi friends ! I liked your topic but I couldn't hear exactly the interview part. In addition to this as it was news and discussion program I think that you shouldn't have used 'Ooo Gosh' so much. Thank yo!
ReplyDeleteyour topic is interesting and creative but you should have paid more attention to your grammer... and yhere were some pronunciational mistakes such as news and besides this the correspondent used 'oh gosh' nearly all in her sentences, i think it's a bit irritating...
ReplyDeleteHi friends, grammatical mistakes aren't good. However, ı liked your topic.Dilay ı likes your intonation. Good job guys :))
ReplyDeleteThe topic is attention-getting and creative, also l like correspondent's pronunciation. However,anchorman should be more fluently.There is no tense agreement ın some part of your speech especially "past and present tenses" should be used more crefully while talking about this kind of incident, because incident generally happens in past.
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