"wonder"should be pronounced /wandır/ not /wondır/ and the sentence of "we all wonder what did she to be.." is wrong.it should be "we all wonder what she did to be..."
Your video is good.Your conversations are clear and understandable.However,you could pay attention to intonation.As a last, there are some deficiencies in anchor's opening sentences .
The format of your study approximates to the original news program’s format. As an audience, my opinion is that a success story could be talked much more enthusiastic, but I felt as if it was a funeral news. ( I couldn’t hear clearly the pronunciation of “award”, it should be /ǝ'wͻ:rd/ )
hi my friends, I think all of your pronounciations in your speeches are generally perfect.But there are few mistakes.I think Özlem's speech input and output aren't effective.She should have said /əˈwɔːd/ instead of /eˈward/ and ''received many awards'' instead of ''received in many awards''.Gamze's pronounciation is good but she should have said /wəːld/ instead of /wörld/.In addition she should have paid attention to eye contact,while yağmur was talking.Yağmur's pronounciation is good but she had a grammatical mistake in her speech.She should have said ''After her death,I devoted myself'' instead of ''devote''. thanks :)
In my opinion,it's a good video as a news but this video is a success story and it should have been better,they would perform more enthusiasticly.Their pronouncation is good but some mistakes,like 'award'.They should have been more careful eye contact, especially Gamze.Besides all of this,there is nothing to be said except thanks.
hi my friends, there are some pronunciation mistakes in some words such as award,receive..also, there is no stress in your words and this makes your speech monotonous..you should care about "eye contact" while speaking with each other..but your organization is good.thanks
In my opinion , the subject is quite good but I think speakers have to be careful about pronounciation and intonation of the words . I think communication between the corresponder and the balerina needs more eye contact with each other not with the camera . Thanks for this succesfull story :)
hi my friends, ı liked your video, you all spoke very well and clearly. please be careful about the pronunciation 'award' and eye contact. your subject was good enough to attract our attention.well done!!!
hi guys fırst of all özlem should explaın what the programme was and who she was.this is not a good beginning.gamze should be careful about her intonation.her speech should be slower.thanks for your video..
At the beginning the note written under the video was ” A successful story: Alexander Ferri’ Should have been “ A success story” or “A story of success” plus successful was spelled wrong. At the beginning there were no introduction of the anchor neither of herself and the show nor about the story, she got right in to speaking.
there isn't either an intro or an ending, and you didn't present yourselves to us. there is no fluency or intonation. you just read the script. sorry to say that but it is not a good video.
hi yo should have made a more fluent speech especially özlem. as for gamze, you should have been more careful about eye contact while speaking,but you did not. except these ones, there is no important deficience...
hi friends,first and foremost ,i can say that three of you should have paid attention to your intonation ...in addition ,there are some pronuncation mistakes such as wonder,dancer,award ...Anyway thank you very much for this successful story :D
hi friends; it is a good and creative story indeed there are some pronunciation mistakes and intonation should be better to make audience interested in your topic.
hello, friends. First of all, there are some pronuncation mistakes such as dancer,award.And all of you should have pay attention to your intonation. Thank you for everything :)
hi friends. firstly thanks for your presentation. l think your intonation could be better. besides there are some pronounciation and gramatical mistakes. for instance; when we say a sentence for an examples, we use ''for example'' . not ''for example; alan brown, sally white, sarah winston'' it should be ''such as alan brown, sally white, sarah winston''
Pronunciation mistakes are emphasized by most of friends but I want to emphasize something different. It is sentence stress. If you use this technique, the speeches will be more understandable and coherent. :)
hi friends ı think it is perfect job. but there is some pronunciation mistakes such as award and world. except for these ı really like your job. thanks..
There is not an opening sentence..They should have been much more vivid,and especially the correspondent should have been lively..they are lack of eye contact;nevertheless,good effort..thanks..
cvideo is vgood. but the corresponder should be more vivid.there is no introduction.there are some mistakes such as "awards".you should pay intonation.thanks.
In general,your video is good but there are some grammatical and intonation mistakes..you should also pay attention to make an eye contact while you are speaking with each other.congratulations.
Hi, the story is good, but unfortunately,your organization is not.because there is no clear beginning and ending.Also there are some grammatical mistakes like"l just think to my shows" here we can't use "to" we must omit it because there is no verb after than "to". lastly, you should be more fluent.
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ReplyDelete"wonder"should be pronounced /wandır/ not /wondır/ and the sentence of "we all wonder what did she to be.." is wrong.it should be "we all wonder what she did to be..."
ReplyDeleteIt is a good video, they speak clearly but they could be more fluent and make eye contact more.
ReplyDeleteThere is no intonation in their sentences.
ReplyDeleteYour video is good.Your conversations are clear and understandable.However,you could pay attention to intonation.As a last, there are some deficiencies in anchor's opening sentences .
ReplyDeleteThe format of your study approximates to the original news program’s format. As an audience, my opinion is that a success story could be talked much more enthusiastic, but I felt as if it was a funeral news. ( I couldn’t hear clearly the pronunciation of “award”, it should be /ǝ'wͻ:rd/ )
ReplyDeleteIt could be better for instance eye contacts aren't syncronized well. Also, the accent they used in this video can be better. Good work, though.
ReplyDeletegenerally setting is good but you can much more pay attention eye contact during the interview and also intonation ,thanks congratulations
Deletehi my friends, I think all of your pronounciations in your speeches are generally perfect.But there are few mistakes.I think Özlem's speech input and output aren't effective.She should have said /əˈwɔːd/ instead of /eˈward/ and ''received many awards'' instead of ''received in many awards''.Gamze's pronounciation is good but she should have said /wəːld/ instead of /wörld/.In addition she should have paid attention to eye contact,while yağmur was talking.Yağmur's pronounciation is good but she had a grammatical mistake in her speech.She should have said ''After her death,I devoted myself'' instead of ''devote''. thanks :)
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ReplyDeleteIn my opinion,it's a good video as a news but this video is a success story and it should have been better,they would perform more enthusiasticly.Their pronouncation is good but some mistakes,like 'award'.They should have been more careful eye contact, especially Gamze.Besides all of this,there is nothing to be said except thanks.
ReplyDeletehi my friends, there are some pronunciation mistakes in some words such as award,receive..also, there is no stress in your words and this makes your speech monotonous..you should care about "eye contact" while speaking with each other..but your organization is good.thanks
ReplyDeleteIn my opinion , the subject is quite good but I think speakers have to be careful about pronounciation and intonation of the words . I think communication between the corresponder and the balerina needs more eye contact with each other not with the camera .
ReplyDeleteThanks for this succesfull story :)
As much as I could understand, I think they should pay more attention to intonation.
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ReplyDeleteThere are pronunciation mistakes in “wonder”,”dancer”,”fans”.
DeleteThere aren’t used connection words by connecting to the correspondent.but good job ;)
hi my friends, ı liked your video, you all spoke very well and clearly. please be careful about the pronunciation 'award' and eye contact. your subject was good enough to attract our attention.well done!!!
ReplyDeleteyour subject is good but there are some pronunciation mistakes such as "present", "girl"... and eye contact is not enough thank you though..
ReplyDeletehi my friends; your topic is good but there is some pronunciation mistakes such as award and ı think you should care about eye contact .well done.
ReplyDeletefirst of all , your topic is very good but there are some mistakes about pronuncation. thank you .
ReplyDeletehi guys fırst of all özlem should explaın what the programme was and who she was.this is not a good beginning.gamze should be careful about her intonation.her speech should be slower.thanks for your video..
ReplyDeleteAs everyone said, there are some pronounciation mistakes and your intonation is weak. You could be more live because it is a success story.
ReplyDeleteit was good example of news and discussions i couldn't catch any grammatical mistakes also pronunciation was correct
ReplyDeleteAt the beginning the note written under the video was ” A successful story: Alexander Ferri’ Should have been “ A success story” or “A story of success” plus successful was spelled wrong. At the beginning there were no introduction of the anchor neither of herself and the show nor about the story, she got right in to speaking.
ReplyDeletethere isn't either an intro or an ending, and you didn't present yourselves to us. there is no fluency or intonation. you just read the script. sorry to say that but it is not a good video.
ReplyDeletethere are some pronounciation mistakes also some hesitations but the video is well organized.
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hi yo should have made a more fluent speech especially özlem. as for gamze, you should have been more careful about eye contact while speaking,but you did not. except these ones, there is no important deficience...
ReplyDeletehi your speech is generally good but tthere are some pronunciation mistakes such as "award".it could be more fluent.Thanks..
ReplyDeletehi friends,first and foremost ,i can say that three of you should have paid attention to your intonation ...in addition ,there are some pronuncation mistakes such as wonder,dancer,award ...Anyway thank you very much for this successful story :D
ReplyDeletehi friends; it is a good and creative story indeed there are some pronunciation mistakes and intonation should be better to make audience interested in your topic.
ReplyDeletehello, friends. First of all, there are some pronuncation mistakes such as dancer,award.And all of you should have pay attention to your intonation. Thank you for everything :)
ReplyDeletehi my friends,ı think your organization is good but there should have been an introduction.also your intonation is poor.
ReplyDeletehi friends. firstly thanks for your presentation. l think your intonation could be better. besides there are some pronounciation and gramatical mistakes. for instance; when we say a sentence for an examples, we use ''for example'' . not ''for example; alan brown, sally white, sarah winston'' it should be ''such as alan brown, sally white, sarah winston''
ReplyDeletePronunciation mistakes are emphasized by most of friends but I want to emphasize something different. It is sentence stress. If you use this technique, the speeches will be more understandable and coherent. :)
ReplyDeletethere are some pronunciation mistakes and in the second part,the speaker make some spelling mistakes..thank you
ReplyDeletehi friends ı think it is perfect job. but there is some pronunciation mistakes such as award and world. except for these ı really like your job. thanks..
ReplyDeleteı think you should pay more attention to your pronunciation.
ReplyDeleteThere is not an opening sentence..They should have been much more vivid,and especially the correspondent should have been lively..they are lack of eye contact;nevertheless,good effort..thanks..
ReplyDeletecvideo is vgood. but the corresponder should be more vivid.there is no introduction.there are some mistakes such as "awards".you should pay intonation.thanks.
ReplyDeletehello my friends, your video is good, topis is interesting but "for example" is pronounced in wrong way. should say /ɪgˈzɑːmp(ə)l/.
ReplyDeleteIn general,your video is good but there are some grammatical and intonation mistakes..you should also pay attention to make an eye contact while you are speaking with each other.congratulations.
ReplyDeleteHi friends! Your video is good. But there are some pronounciation mistakes for example 'fan'. Eye contact can be better . Thank you!
ReplyDeleteHi, the story is good, but unfortunately,your organization is not.because there is no clear beginning and ending.Also there are some grammatical mistakes like"l just think to my shows" here we can't use "to" we must omit it because there is no verb after than "to". lastly, you should be more fluent.
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