hi friends,your video is good but there are some mistakes.you should pronounce /ˈsəːdʒ(ə)ri/,/dəˈmɛstɪkeɪtɪd/,/prɪˈfəːd/, and say 'good girl' instead of 'good boy' thanks...
hi guys i liked your video and your organization. but you should be careful about your fluency. You should have said "its a he" when referring to Marco. Other then small mistakes its a good one. thanks.
Hi friends,i liked your place choice and speech but there are some pronunciation mistakes. about and preferred should be pronunced like /əˈbaʊt/ , /prɪˈfɜːd/ thank you.
congratulations friends, it is a well-organized video. the idea to make your video an a clinic is creative but there are some pronunciation mistakes such as about, care thank you though
the organization is really good,your spelling and intonation is good too, thanks
ReplyDeletehi guys ı liked your video so much your intonation and organization are good thanks.
ReplyDeleteI liked your intonation and speech thanks..
ReplyDeletehi friends,your video is good but there are some mistakes.you should pronounce /ˈsəːdʒ(ə)ri/,/dəˈmɛstɪkeɪtɪd/,/prɪˈfəːd/, and say 'good girl' instead of 'good boy' thanks...
ReplyDeletehey guys you organisation is really good ı liked the video also good job!
ReplyDeletethere is a pronunciation mistake:'domesticate'
ReplyDeleteYour intonations and speech are well, good job.
ReplyDeletehi guys i liked your video and your organization. but you should be careful about your fluency. You should have said "its a he" when referring to Marco. Other then small mistakes its a good one. thanks.
ReplyDeletehi friends,the organization is good.But you are not fluent and also some pronunciation mistakes such as prefered..thanks
ReplyDeleteYour organization is very good. "care" was pronounced incorrectly.
ReplyDeleteYour organization is good.there is a mistake "it is she"
ReplyDeleteI liked your organization..just be careful when you pronounce the word 'care' thanks for your effort..
ReplyDeleteHi. Pronunciation seems to be good but intonation can be improved.
ReplyDeleteİt's really good idea to use a clinic.
ReplyDeleteDomesticated should pronunciate like that '/dəˈmɛstɪkeɪtɪd/'
thank for your effort
Hi friends,i liked your place choice and speech but there are some pronunciation mistakes. about and preferred should be pronunced like /əˈbaʊt/ , /prɪˈfɜːd/ thank you.
ReplyDeletecongratulations friends, it is a well-organized video. the idea to make your video an a clinic is creative but there are some pronunciation mistakes such as about, care thank you though
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