Monday, May 14, 2012

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Alper Öztürk, Emel Aydın, Sedef Kocabaş

16 comments:

  1. the organization is really good,your spelling and intonation is good too, thanks

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  2. hi guys ı liked your video so much your intonation and organization are good thanks.

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  3. I liked your intonation and speech thanks..

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  4. hi friends,your video is good but there are some mistakes.you should pronounce /ˈsəːdʒ(ə)ri/,/dəˈmɛstɪkeɪtɪd/,/prɪˈfəːd/, and say 'good girl' instead of 'good boy' thanks...

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  5. hey guys you organisation is really good ı liked the video also good job!

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  6. there is a pronunciation mistake:'domesticate'

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  7. Your intonations and speech are well, good job.

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  8. hi guys i liked your video and your organization. but you should be careful about your fluency. You should have said "its a he" when referring to Marco. Other then small mistakes its a good one. thanks.

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  9. hi friends,the organization is good.But you are not fluent and also some pronunciation mistakes such as prefered..thanks

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  10. Your organization is very good. "care" was pronounced incorrectly.

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  11. Your organization is good.there is a mistake "it is she"

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  12. I liked your organization..just be careful when you pronounce the word 'care' thanks for your effort..

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  13. Hi. Pronunciation seems to be good but intonation can be improved.

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  14. İt's really good idea to use a clinic.

    Domesticated should pronunciate like that '/dəˈmɛstɪkeɪtɪd/'

    thank for your effort

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  15. Hi friends,i liked your place choice and speech but there are some pronunciation mistakes. about and preferred should be pronunced like /əˈbaʊt/ , /prɪˈfɜːd/ thank you.

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  16. congratulations friends, it is a well-organized video. the idea to make your video an a clinic is creative but there are some pronunciation mistakes such as about, care thank you though

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